Peter and the Nano-bots
- Paul Jackson
- Apr 3
- 13 min read
Today's prompt was - Heartbeat, and another Planet.
"Clear!" Dr Dave stepped back, paddles still in hand. The room held its breath as the three observers froze.
"Pulse! We’ve got a sinus rhythm!" someone yelled over the chaos.
"Peter? Peter, can you hear me?" The doctor gave his cheek a sharp slap. "Wake up, mate. We must move!"
Peter groaned, shaking his head to clear the fog. "Where am I?"
Before anyone could answer, the room jolted violently, raining dust and debris down on the surgical team.
“Get another tarp,” the Dr shouted.
A nurse pulled one from under a cart.
“What's happening?” Peter tried to sit up.
The nurse snapped the tarp open just as another tremor rolled through the floor, rattling the metal trays. A lightbulb burst overhead, showering everyone in glass.
“What's happening? Somebody tell me?” Peter pushed himself up on his elbows, but his arms trembled like they didn’t quite belong to him.
The doctor didn't respond immediately; he was occupied with fastening the tarp to the gurney, his hands working swiftly.
Doctor Dave leaned in. “You died, mate..., Twice.” He held up two fingers to clarify, before patting him on the chest.
Peter blinked, trying to anchor himself. The room was a pop-up medical bay, with concrete walls, exposed pipes, and dust drifting like confetti. Somewhere beyond the door, something boomed against the building; they could also hear the rat-tat-tat of the artillery fire.
The Doctor turned his attention to him. "We are once again under attack. The entire compound is collapsing. And you..., — Another explosion occurred, causing a crack to appear along the far wall towards the ceiling. Sunlight filtered through, along with the orange dust this god-forsaken planet had an abundance of. Then came a sound followed by the presence of a creature, a native of the Planet.
The nurse grabbed Peter’s wrist. “Can you stand?”
“Yes..., I think, tell me again who said this planet was safe?” He had remembered the where, the who, but not the why.
The Dr laughed, “Look, you are the only pilot left, so get your arse over to your ship and get it started, we need to be off-world ASAP.
The ceiling groaned as a metal arm started to peel it off, exposing the makeshift medic bay. Everyone in the room picked up their weapons, pointed them towards the machine and fired.
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The massive metallic arm belonged to Zorgon, a repurposed military unit. With a screech of shearing steel, he peeled back the ceiling like the lid of a tin can, revealing a room of flickering-beeping consoles choked with orange dust. “The humans were gone—but not far,” he reported back.
Zorgon swivelled his top half 180 degrees and then pivoted his optical sensors toward the extraction zone. His AI translator flickered to life, capturing a frantic command over the din: "Shoot for the head! Hit the laser housing!"
"Go! Move it now!" Dr Dave bellowed. His rifle kicked violently against his shoulder, spitting a stream of lead that sparked and ricocheted off the machine’s reinforced helmet.
Peter tumbled off the gurney. His legs felt like leaden weights, but a desperate surge of adrenaline, bolstered by the lingering electric sting of the defibrillator paddles, jolted him to his feet. He didn't dare glance back. Behind him, the nurse and doctor had already joined the desperate firing line, their handguns popping like firecrackers against the overwhelming mechanical roar of the alien being.
He stumbled through the ruins of the corridor, the "rat-tat-tat" of the colony’s last turrets echoing in the distance. The hangar was a twisted wreck, but there she sat: the Vanguard, his pride and joy, the only thing he owned. This was going to be a lifeboat for the twenty people left behind.
He scrambled up the boarding ramp, jumped into the pilot's seat placing his hand on the glass panel. The ship’s AI flickered to life, its voice calm despite the carnage. "Biometrics recognised. Welcome back, Captain Peter. You appear to have been legally dead for seven minutes."
"Skip the pleasantries, Vee," Peter wheezed, making himself comfortable. His fingers danced over the consoles, muscle memory overriding his clouded mind. "Power to thrusters. Vent the cooling gases. We’re taking everyone. Come on, Vee, I need you to play ball.”
“Your wish is my command, Captain Peter; I will let you know when all personnel are safely onboard.”
Outside, the med-bay team was retreating toward the ramp, firing in disciplined bursts. Behind them, more metal shadows appeared through the dust.
"They're on the ramp!" Dr Dave’s voice cracked over the comms.
"Get ready, Vee, everyone else, strap yourself in," Peter yelled, finger poised over several buttons.
“All human life onboard and accounted for, captain.” The AI voice confirmed.
The ship groaned, straining against the debris pinning it down. Peter gritted his teeth, his heart thumping. With a violent jolt, the Vanguard tore free from the wreckage.
He pulled the yoke back hard. As they broke through the atmosphere, the orange dust gave way to the cold, silent black of space. Peter looked at his trembling hands, then at the radar. The planet below was a patchwork of fire.
“Captain, we have passed through the planet's mesosphere and the stratosphere. Do you have a........, Dr Dave? I think your presence is needed on the bridge?” Vee asked through the speaker system.
“I don't know how to fly these things,” the Dr answered, looking around, not knowing which speaker to speak to.
“Correct, Dr Dave, I would not presume to ask.” Some machines started to beep, and it was getting louder. “Dr Dave, the captain's heart has stopped beating, and I think it could be a problem.”
Dave unclipped his safety harness, making his way to the bridge, “Lucy, come with me,” he shouted over the beeping sound. “And bring your bag”
Lucy followed the instructions and slipped the bag strap over her shoulder.
“Computer, what are his vitals?”
“None, Dr Dave, the monitor in his seat tells me there are no life signs”
Dave reached the captain's chair, placing two fingers on his neck. “Shit. Computer, do you have a medical bag?”
“Yes, under his seat, the captain said, putting it there, it reminded him of old days back on earth.”
Lucy arrived, pulled out the Medi-bag, “Nothing in here to shock him, Doc,” she said, tipping the items all over the floor.
“Computer, I have nothing to shock him. Can you help?”
“Yes, Dr Dave. I can bring him back, but he will be a changed man.”
“Just do it, we need him to fly this ship.”
A flap opened on the console in front of the captain's chair, and a probe came out; on the end was a hypodermic needle. “Please stand back. This may look uncomfortable, but I assure you, the captain will live.” The needle made its way to a vein on Peter's right hand. “I need access to a vein, Dr Dave,” Vee said.
“He’s dead; there is no blood flowing to give you a vein.”
“OK, I will go straight to his brain,” the probe raised, stopping in front of the captain's face, the needle extended out several inches, there was a puff of air, then the probe moved back to the console.
“Is it done? What did you do?” Dr Dave looked astonished.
“Before I explain, you might want to strap the captain into his seat. Using leg. Arm and head restraints.”
Lucy went about strapping in the captain. The Doctor was staring at the camera on the console, “Well, come on, tell me what just happened?”
“I injected 2 millilitres of saline into the captain's optical nerve; this is the quickest and direct path to his brain.”
“Saline that won’t bring him back.” The Doctor was getting annoyed.
The captain's body started to shake; within seconds, his arms and legs were trying to thrash about, but the restraints kept him in the chair.
“I need to know what you injected into him” The Dr slammed his hand down on the console.
“Four million Nano-bots, they will rebuild anything damaged, and together they will have enough kinetic energy to restart his heart.”
“Kinetic energy, what the hell are you talking about?”
Another nurse had entered the bridge to help, “I know what it” she did a circle motion with her finger, not knowing where the computer was talking from. “Kinetic energy is the energy an object possesses due to its motion. As the bots move around his body, they build up speed, heat and energy. This will shock his heart into starting again.” She smiled, “I did a course before joining the Medi staff.”
“The Nurse is correct, Dr Dave, and you will see the captain is now breathing it will take a few minutes for him to become... stable, and he will be more than one hundred per cent, good to go”
Peter’s eyes snapped open. They weren't the sky-blue Dave remembered; they were silver, a dull light. He didn’t gasp for air—he simply began to breathe as though nothing had happened. The nurse checked his pulse, “Seventy beats per minute, he’s doing good”
“Peter? You with us?” Dave asked, leaning in but keeping his hands ready to grab a sedative if the ‘kinetic energy’ turned into a frenzy.
The captain’s head tilted. The restraints groaned under a sudden, brief surge of strength, then Peter’s muscles relaxed. He looked at his hands, “Can you take these off?”
Dr Dave untied the restraints, “The computer told us to, don’t know if it was for our or your safety?”
“Thanks, now...,” Peter's body went rigid in the seat.
“It's OK, I need to recalibrate a few things and reboot his system,” The computer said.
“What do you mean, reboot HIS system? What the hell have you done?”
“Captain Peter will be back with us in 5, 4, 3, 2, and he’s back”
“Vee,” Peter’s voice was different, robotic, like it was being filtered through the ship itself. “Status of the pursuit craft?” he asked.
“Three Jago-class interceptors have broken atmosphere, Captain,” the AI replied instantly. “They are locking on.”
Peter didn't reach for the yoke. Instead, he closed his eyes. On the console, the lights shifted from amber to a deep, predatory violet. “I can feel them, Vee. I can feel the ship’s hull. I can feel the heat of the engines.” He looked at Dave, a strange, calm smile on his face. “The nanobots didn't just fix me, Doc. They’ve bridged the gap. I am the Vanguard now.”
With a thought, the ship didn't just bank—it pirouetted in a way that should have crushed the passengers with G-force, yet the internal gravity remained perfectly level. Peter’s fingers twitched in mid-air, like he was using an invisible keyboard. Outside, the Vanguard’s rear turrets spat out a sequence of plasma bolts so precise they found the interceptors' fuel vents before the enemy could even fire.
“We’re clear,” Peter whispered, the silver light in his eyes dimming to a soft glow. He looked back at the terrified survivors huddling in the corridor. “Set a course for the Kepler station, Vee. And someone get me a glass of water. I feel like I’ve been running for a thousand miles.”
Dave exhaled, a weight that had been anchored to his chest since they left the surface. He glanced from Lucy to the figure that used to be a man. "A full hundred per cent?" he muttered toward the rafters.
"As I said, Doctor," Vee chirped. "The captain is good to go."
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Just leaving the planet's surface, Zorgon had to use an unfamiliar ship as his had been damaged in the hangar, "Track the ion trail," Zorgon hissed to his navigator. "The ship will leave a signature. We do not lose him now."
Back on the Vanguard, the silence in the cockpit was heavy, broken only by the rhythmic hum of Peter's heartbeat coming through the speakers. Dave approached him slowly, holding a plastic cup of water. He noticed Peter wasn’t touching the pilot’s chair; he was hovering millimetres above it, held in a delicate web of magnetic suspension.
"Here," Dave said, his voice trembling slightly.
Peter took the water, his fingers momentarily unable to grasp the cup; he had to will it to happen. “So that's how it's going to be, is it?” he thought the words.
Vee responded in his head. “Yes, Captain, all you have to do is think a command, and it will be done.”
He drank it in one go; he had no idea if he could eat or drink. He then thought about going to the toilet, but pushed that thought out.
"The Kepler station is three light-hours away," Vee announced, her voice now echoing directly inside Peter’s skull rather than through the speakers. "Zorgon’s flagship has just cleared the thermosphere. He is pinging our location."
Peter wiped his mouth and looked at the starfield. He didn't see points of light; he saw vectors, gravitational wells, and the cold, dark threads of the slipstream. He didn't need a nav-computer to tell him what was coming.
"Let him come," Peter said, his voice resonating with a metallic undertone. He turned to Lucy, who was watching him with a mix of awe and terror. “Get some sleep Lucy, I’ll wake you if I need you or we get to Kepler, whichever comes first.
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Zorgon's navigator had plotted a course to intercept the Vanguard before it could enter the Kepler Station. “I can see them on the monitor,” the navigator told Zorgon.
“I don't know if this pile of junk has stealth or is capable of invisibility, have a look,” he ordered his number two.
“On it,” after a few seconds of button pressing and swiping of screens, “No, Sir, this ship is, if I can be straight, a total fuck up, no wonder the other pilots left it behind.”
“Ok, we are where we are. How are we for munitions? Do we have any, or was it emptied?”
“In that regard, Sir, we are good, not enough to win a war but plenty to take out the Vanguard.”
Zorgon leaned back in his command throne, mandibles flexing in irritation. “Plenty is enough. Bring us in on an oblique vector. I want the Vanguard boxed in before they can spool up their slipstream.”
“Aye, Sir,” the navigator replied, claws dancing across the holo-controls. “Intercept in twelve minutes.”
Zorgon’s eyes narrowed. “Twelve minutes is an eternity. Push the reactors. I want that ship in my jaws.”
The bridge lights dimmed as the flagship surged forward, its engines howling like something alive and furious.
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On the Vanguard, Peter felt the pressure wave of Zorgon’s acceleration before Vee even spoke. It didn’t sound. It wasn’t vibration. It was data—raw, unfiltered telemetry pouring into his mind like a second heartbeat.
“Zorgon is accelerating to intercept,” Vee said. “He intends to cut us off before we reach Kepler Station.”
Peter stood, the deck plating humming beneath his feet as if responding to him.
Maybe it was. Maybe he was imagining it. Maybe he wasn’t.
Lucy had already curled up in the crash couch, half-asleep, half-watching him like he might explode or ascend.
“Vee,” Peter thought, “show me his firing arcs.”
The starfield shifted. Lines, cones, and probability clouds unfolded across his vision like a tactical mandala. Zorgon’s flagship was a brute—fast, heavily armed, but predictable. A predator that assumed its prey would run.
Peter wasn’t running.
“Captain,” Vee said, “If we maintain current course, Zorgon will have a firing solution in eight minutes.”
“And if we don’t maintain it?”
A pause. “Then he won’t know what you’re doing.”
Peter smiled. It wasn’t a human smile. It felt too cold, too precise. “Good,” he said aloud. “Let’s confuse him.”
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On Zorgon’s bridge, alarms chirped. “Sir—Vanguard just… vanished.”
Zorgon’s mandibles clicked. “Impossible. They don’t have stealth.”
“I know, Sir, but—look.” The navigator expanded the tactical display. The Vanguard’s icon flickered, jittered, then split into three ghost signatures.
“Which one is real?” Zorgon demanded.
“I… don’t know.”
Zorgon slammed a fist into the arm of his throne. “He’s playing games. That human. I want him dead.”
His number two swallowed. “Sir, if he can spoof our sensors—”
“Then he can outmanoeuvre us,” Zorgon finished. “Prepare all batteries. Fire on anything that moves.”
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Inside the Vanguard, Peter felt the enemy’s confusion like a warm pulse in the back of his skull.
“Vee,” he thought, “let’s see how brave this Zorgon really is.”
“What do you intend, Captain?”
Peter stepped forward, eyes glowing faintly with the reflected starlight.
“We’re not going to Kepler Station,” he said. “Not yet.”
He pointed toward the void where Zorgon’s flagship lurked. “We’re going to meet him head-on.”
The Vanguard didn't just accelerate; it tore through the fabric of space and time. Peter’s mind, hardwired into the ship’s quintessence drive, perceived the universe as a series of toggles and levers. He wasn't steering a ship; he was rewriting his position in real-time.
“Zorgon’s batteries are discharging,” Vee reported, her voice a cool contrast to the adrenaline spiking in Peter’s veins. “He’s targeting the ghost signatures. Probability of a hit on our true hull is less than four per cent.”
“Lower it,” Peter commanded.
He wrenched the Vanguard into a series of micro-jumps—short, violent bursts of speed that left afterimages of ionising radiation. To Zorgon’s sensors, the three ghosts became a dozen. A swarm of Vanguards was now descending upon the flagship like a cloud of angry hornets.
On the flagship bridge, Zorgon roared as his screen turned into a chaotic mess of false positives. “I want him dead! Target the central cluster!”
“Sir, the central cluster is space!” the navigator screamed. “He’s—he’s below us, I’d say about twenty feet!”
Peter didn't fire his main cannons. Instead, he waited until he was so close he could see the individual rivets on the flagship’s ventral plating.
“Now, Vee. The E M P.”
The Vanguard didn't shoot lasers; it emitted a massive electromagnetic pulse directly upwards. The bots in Peter’s head throbbed, channelling the ship’s raw processing power into a digital spear.
Zorgon’s shields didn't fail, it just didn’t have a clue what was happening. No one had ever got close enough to do that before. “What’s happened? Why have we stopped? Why is nothing working?” He shouted at his crew.
“Sir, this is new technology. We have never encountered something like this before. They have knocked out all our instruments with one blast, all the circuits are blown, it would take weeks, that's if we could, I think the ship is dead.”
Peter brought the Vanguard to a dead stop, hovering directly in front of Zorgon’s observation deck. The two commanders were separated by only a hundred meters of vacuum and two layers of reinforced glass.
Peter opened a wide-band channel. He didn’t need a screen to see Zorgon; he could feel the alien’s terror through the ship’s biosensors.
“You thought I would be easy because I’m small,” Peter’s voice echoed through the flagship’s dying speakers.”
Zorgon stared out the window, his mandibles frozen.
“Kepler Station is a safe place, Vee. Attach a tractor beam, we will tow them in and let the authorities deal with them.”
“Actually, sir,” Vee’s voice chirped through Peter’s neural link, sounding far too cheerful for a ship that had just survived a death-match. “The tractor beam might be overkill. With their power grid fried, they have the aerodynamic stability of an extremely expensive brick. I’ll just nudge them toward the station's gravity well.”
Peter leaned back in his pilot’s chair, the throbbing in his head subsiding into a dull, satisfied hum. On the other side of the glass, Zorgon’s massive silhouette was motionless. The terrifying conqueror of the Outer Rim now looked like nothing more than a confused passenger on a ghost ship.
“Do it,” Peter said softly. “And Vee? Send a message ahead to Kepler Security. Tell them we’re bringing in a 'special delivery.' They might want to bring extra-large handcuffs.”
As the Vanguard’s magnetic tethers locked onto the massive flagship, the tiny ship began to pull. It was a ridiculous sight, a hummingbird towing a hawk.
As they entered the inner perimeter, Kepler Security sent out a fleet of interceptors, not to attack, but to surround the dead flagship like a cautious honour guard. The station’s massive tractor beams took over, pulling the dead behemoth into a secure dry-dock while Peter brought the Vanguard into a hero's landing at Bay 42.
A security team in heavy EVA suits boarded the flagship through manual hatches. Because Peter’s EMP fried all digital systems, the alien crew, including a humiliated Zorgon, were found huddled in the dark, unable to even open their own internal doors without help.
Peter was met on the hangar floor by the Station Commander and a swarm of news drones.
While Zorgon is led away in "extra-large handcuffs," tech teams begin the weeks-long process of scraping the flagship's data cores. They realise Peter didn't just stop a ship; he captured the entire tactical database of the Outer Rim's most feared conqueror.
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